Week 2 Writing
Background:
Chile is a country where the
social studies are less important than the mathematical, physical or biological
studies. Careers like Sociology, Literature, History, Anthropology or any else
that are dedicate to research, it is considerate a career no able for a good
job. According to a statistical study of the careers with the highest
employment rate, the first ten careers belong to scientific area. It is important
to know that Chile is a very uncultured and ignorant country, focus in
neoliberalism and capitalism, and additionally poor. According to a research four out of ten young people are pursuing undergraduate careers in universities, professional institutes or technical training centers. That's why most of the people does not have university studies and they work a lot. People that prefer study an university career think about "future” first, that means
have a stable work with a lot of money and a good social status like Medicine,
Laws, Engineering, and many others.
Problem:
Anthropology in
particular, in Chile is the opposite, currently there is no future job, there aren’t
many opportunities to emerge like a professional and the career is taught
in a few universities. Only two of them teach physical anthropology they are University
of Concepción and University of Chile and about archeology, also a branch of
anthropology, is taught it only by the last one. However anthropology needs to
be recognized by the people in general, the most of them don’t know what it’s
about and it’s really important for their culture and knowledge.
Solution:
Despite the increasing
importance of culture and past, and more in a country like Chile, it is
important that high school students can be able to understand about our
ascendants, evolution and history in a deep way as long as they can recognize some
sides of anthropology and also the career, because actually they even know that
exist. Being informed in this country is a good way to deal with the society,
that’s why another solution for teenagers or adults it is read about
anthropology stuff, it is not have to be a complicate article, it can be any
paper related to an anthropological perspective, in the end anthropology is a
career dedicated to study the human society and their culture.
Hi Valentina,
ResponderEliminarThe text is good. I do not think you should change it but you decide. There is room for improvement in how you present information. You cannot state things as facts unless you provide statistical data. So you could change how you present a few facts.